God Said No

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Ash jolted awake, her heart racing. Something was very, very wrong. She could sense it. She slipped out of bed, murmuring "I'm checking on Tris" as she left the room. She had no clue if she'd woken Jeremy or not, but she didn't bother to check. Tristan had had a pretty bad cough the day before, and she hoped it hadn't worsened during the night.

The blonde walked into his room and went over to the side of the bed. His breathing was shallow and rapid. His entire body trembled, and whens she put her  his skin was frighteningly hot and clammy.

"Tristan!" Ash cried, gathering him into her arms. "Tristan, what's wrong, Honey?"

He moaned in pain but said nothing. He needed to go to the A&E. Now.

"Sweetie, answer me. Please…"

Still no response. He was clearly in too much agony to give one. She stood up went to leave. The young woman was halfway out the door when he finally mumbled something. However, it was an incoherent string of syllables- she wouldn't be surprised if it wasn't just English. Ash supposed she was to blame for that one. Suddenly, he began coughing violently, and it was all she needed to sprint down the hallway back to their room, screaming her boyfriend's name as she entered.
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Jeremy was out of bed before fully conscious.
There was something horrible in her voice......real fear making her voice ragged.
He knocked his knee off the bed as he pulled on some trousers and then grabbed a jacket but froze as Ash appeared gripping a very pale Tristan.
It hit him like a blow to the stomach.
His own breathing became ragged as panic set in.
"Oh God. Oh God..." He pulled on the jacket and ran over, touching his son's forehead.....it was hot but the sweat was cold. Dear God....his breathing was a slow, long rattle.
"Get a coat on, I'll get him in a car!" He took the boy and God his little form was trembling.
He got a blanket and wrapped the boy up.